Monday, November 12, 2012

Argumentative Essay


Anorexia: The Trend to Die For

When you see a five foot 8 inch, 85 pound woman, what do you see? I see bones—a sick, unhealthy, fragile female who is no longer in control of herself. This delicate stage is called Anorexia. Your organs are leisurely shutting down one at a time, while you become mentally impaired as well. The body makes changes for the worse, and they are very noticeable. If a person is slowly killing themselves by starvation, why do adolescents want to do this?

                The famous Marilyn Monroe wore a size eight jeans and size twelve dress. She was known for many reasons; her size being one of them. In the 1920’s-1950, women wanted to be thick, or curvy, but from the 1960’s to now, a new era has been formed. Thin is in. Now-a-days the average woman’s magazine is 75% advertisements on weight loss and becoming skinny (Richardson 14). Based on previous history, women will never be satisfied with their appearance, so there will never be a time when women think they are perfect the way they are.

                When patients start asking their doctor how much weight they have to lose to be classified as anorexic, you know this epidemic is problem. Unfortunately, this seems to be the case in a massive amount of doctors’ offices across the United States. The vast majority of these questions are asked by adolescents. Dr. Richard Kreipe is one of the doctors who have been asked this question. After helping a young, rich, popular girl overcome anorexia, another young not-so-popular girl came in asking how much weight she would have to lose to be considered anorexic. Dr. Kreipe’s theory is “If they (young women) become thin or get an eating disorder, they will become popular” (Valerie Bauman 3). Another doctor, Tom Kersting, agrees with Kreipe saying kids only do what other kids do. Kersting describes girls who want to be anorexic, but portray different satisfactions with their weight loss, as “Wannarexic” (Bauman 7). According to the New York Times, to be diagnosed with anorexia women must miss at least three consecutive menstrual periods, have a distorted image of their weight or shape, deny serious health consequences of their low weight, have an intense fear of gaining weight even when severely underweight, and at least 15%-60% of normal body weight is lost (New York Times Health Administration).

It is not only the United States that has problems with the media affecting the mindsets of adolescent females. Due to a significant increase of eating disorders each year, Israel has created a law banning underweight models and regulates Photoshop usage in advertisements and media. This all started with a man named Adi Barkan, a photographer. A 15 year old girl named Caty met with him to ask what a model should look like. She was 5’7 and weighed 79 pounds (Minsberg 4). Barkan realized she needed hospitalization, and she stayed there for 5 months in recovery. If he would have been ignorant to the thought, she would have died within a matter of days. Adi was recognized publically for his doings; shortly after he had 174 messages from anorexics and bulimics (bulimia is when a person goes on a number of crash diets, then turns to binge eating, eating more than 2,000 calories at one sitting, for pleasure) asking for his help; he met with all of them (Minsberg 7).  Barkan partnered with a parliament member named Rachel Adato, to make the issue of anorexia and bulimia known. As they were researching, the figured out that 1,500 Israelian’s get an eating disorder every year, and 10% of them are teenagers (Minsberg 12). Adato and Barkan worked for two years on the legislative, and finally they pass the “Photoshop Law”. Although some modeling agencies claim ‘the models eat; they are just naturally skinny’, there is only 5% of girls who are underweight and actually eat in Israel (Minsberg 15). Imagine if this were to happen in the United States. Having a law that could prevent the percentage of anorexics increasing could benefit in more than one way. One way the law would benefit the U.S. is, having the amount of anorexics decrease; therefore the economy would increase. The positive growth in the economy would be caused by people having more money to spend because they would not have to over spend on their health care. Another way this law could help is, by not giving the American people an ideal sense of what a woman should look like.

Trends come and go, so why harm yourself to a point you may not be able to come back from, just for a statement? This was never wanted in the past. Women aspired to have an hourglass figure, with hips and ‘fullness’ to their shape. Many famous women (Marilyn Monroe, Betty Grable, The Sennett Girls, Jayne Mansfield, Sophia Loren, etc.) in the 1920’s were simply famous because of their size. Marilyn Monroe had a 37 inch bust, 23 inch waist, and 36 inch hips (Danamo 4). Betty Grable had a 36 inch chest, 23 inch waist, and 35 inch hips (Tadlock 9). Jayne Mansfield had a 46 inch chest, 23 inch waist, and 37 inch hips (Versus 3). Sophia Loren had a 36 inch chest, 24 inch waist, and 38 inch hips (Dames 2). Compare that to a model today: 32 inch chest, 23 inch waist, 32 inch hips. The size of the waist has always wanted to be tiny, but the chest and hips have a difference of three or more inches. According to ABC News, twenty years ago, the average fashion model weighed 8% less than the average women; today, she weighs 23% less (Lovett 2). The average American woman is 5’4” and weighs 140 pounds, but the average American model is 5’11” and weighs 117 pounds (Manasan 4). These numbers do not add up. There is a difference of seven inches taller, yet 23 pounds lighter. A normal weight bmi (body mass index) is between 18.5 being the lowest and 24.9 being the highest depending on the person. When you calculate the average models height and weight, the bmi is 16.3. This is underweight, and affects everyone. According to Lorraine Manasan, 42% of 1st-3rd graders want to be thinner than what they are now. They are around 6 years old to 8 years old. This is a problem that needs to be fixed.

How bad are the weight loss advertisements really? With the growing number of obesity, maybe it is a good idea to make people want a slimmer appearance—for health purposes. According to The Center for Disease Control and Prevention, 1 in 3 American children born in 2000 will be diabetic when they get older. The media is contradicting itself by having cheap food that may add unwanted weight gain and either showing underweight models, or photo shopping every picture to make the “perfect women.” Yet, sites like prettythin.com are helping some people with eating disorders function and get help when needed. Are the pros really out-weighing the cons?

Anorexia can occur in anyone, at any time. To some people, it is like they are drowning in an ocean that never ends, because the satisfaction of perfection does not exist. There is very little good that can come out of an eating disorder. If the government takes action in their own hands, the destructive disorders may significantly decrease. The world might go from “curvy”, to “thin”, to “everyone being perfect in their own way.”

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